Beyond The Pale
My Lover
Who art not in heaven
Pall be thy game
My kingdom done
My will be gone
On heart as it is in death
Give me my daily wound
And forgive not my rages
As I yearn for whom raged against me
Please lead me, Temptation
Please surrender me, Malevolent
For I am the realm
Of pain
Of ardor
And of mourning
Without end

great stuff, girl
this poem is really amazing. this was only the 1st or 2nd post i read and had to give my two sense. i like how you used a familiar vessel for your words because this way people are attracted to it because it is familiar, but when the words are read as they are it obviously is a very different meaning. i think you are very brave for letting other peole read your pain and love in your heart. it is not easy to open up in front of others that way. i don’t think i could do it! I also think your message is beautiful
what is service 2012? anyway i am a fan! you are fearless
brave to use
i have enjoyed your writing for some time. love is a great subject to study and to interpret. i think you should keep exploring the depths of your heart. i am sure we all enjoy following you there
You are a tortured beautiful soul